Sunday, December 26, 2010

Fiction55: Diamonds are Forever

The colors scattered out of the six facets, luminous, eager to show themselves to the world, bursting like tiny crackers into the eyes of the one who was too stunned to speak.

A sob threatened to escape her throat but she stared transfixed. And finally, she managed a smile and said, "I'm so happy for you."
With just one thought in her head- he was supposed to be mine...!

5 comments:

No Guts No Glory said...

Sounds like a voice from inside.. Beautifully written.. :)

Thousif Raza said...

love it... on to the next one ;) ,love the word play here...suweet

HaRy!! said...

good 55er!!! hav tried only the humor genre...this is new

Remya said...

@Harsheen: Erm.. Dunno about the voice from inside but thanks :)

@Thousif: Hey! You're alive, bud! Thank you for reading it :)

@Hary: Oh and even if you have tried the humor genre, you're amazing at it.
PS. Welcome to the depressing world ;)

Charu said...

Like the title. But the writing seems a touch...used, if you won't mind the honesty.
On the other hand, glad you're churning out so many 55 fictions :)